Animatic!

Here is the second animatic we have created. We straight away edited from the first one as it was a combination of loads of shots we each made. I was editor during creating this but the whole group was working along side me giving their points and views. We have cut and chopped shots up to fit the mood we want. We want to create an strange atmosphere, like there is something wrong. For example all the stuff looks like it has just been made, the food is still hot and things look like they were just been moved or used. We need to add a few scenes to create the story which is that the ship has become shipwrecked and the crew have abandoned it.

Below are my comments on the Animatic and what I feel would improve it, also we need to cut it down as it does stray over the 90 seconds.

Shot Number	Ollie's Notes
1	Clean the camera zoom as it wobbles around, Composition is also off as the boat sways from center screen looks strange.
2	Cuts to late for the blend! combine scene 1 with this shot and create a nice blend between them.
3	to long, make it a second long? gives a nice effect when cutting to next shot.
4	to close! won't be able to see the waves etc. Change angle to 3/4 view.
5	speed up animation, 1 second on each cannon, would make nicer pace.
6	same again, speed up animation and shorten.
7	I like this shot, nice pace and nice composition. Start to plan animation and models needed!
8	Maybe a fraction shorter! nice pace of animation but shot is abit to long.
9	Nice composition. Start to model stairs ready to play with composition more.
10	Nice shot. Keep as it stands! start to bring to next stage!
11	fine first part!
12	second part of blend is to long, speed up animation?
13	take a second off.
14	reposition camera so it has all what is seen in the resolution gate! one of the nicest shots.
15	Take 1 second off to keep a nice pace going
16	same again take a second off
17	to long, maybe take of a second at the end as the scene becomes bait empty
18	nice shot, good length and pace!
19	nice but needs work with whats in the shot!
20	change the composition so you can see the dining room empty! but nice shot
21	take of 1 second!
22	same again to long so take of 1 second
23	nice shot, keep the same!
24	cut a fraction off at the end
25	nice, but again need to add models and details!
26	clean camera, sweeping weirdly and create blending shot!
27	Extend shot to show foot steps coming over a mound away from the ship!